良好的开始是成功的一半,对于雅思作文考试来说也是如此。不过,雅思大作文的开头很好,必然也需要有一个精彩的结尾才行,这样才能让阅卷老师眼前一亮。虽然雅思作文的分数并不是取决于结尾段落,但是一个漂亮而干脆的结尾段还是会为文章增色不少,也会将前文出现的小瑕疵掩盖掉,把大作文的分数拿到最高。下面是小编为您收集整理的结尾技巧很重要,供大家参考!

雅思8分作文感想–结尾技巧很重要

招式一、回答问题answer thequestion

E.g. When a country develops its technology; the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In conclusion, without suggesting that all technology is necessarily good, I thinkit is by no means ‘ pointless’, in any way, to try to keep traditions alive with technology. We should not ignore technology, because it can be our friendand support our way of life.

这个结尾段落明确地提出了自己的观点,不是所有的科技都是好的,但是科技也不是完全没有用处的。

招式二、不添加新的信息not apply anynew information

E.g. Happiness is considered to be very important in life.Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?

Like self-awareness, this is also very difficult to achieve, but I think these are the two factors that may be the most important for achieving happiness.

用1句话明确自己的观点,幸福很难定义,可能有两个因素起到作用。

招式三、2-3个句子为宜 2-3 sentences are enough

E.g. Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational; otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?

Finally, Ithink it is also important to remember that children need to relax as well as work. If everything they do must have some educational or academic relevance,then they will soon get tired of studying altogether, which is the last thing parents would want.

2句话,作者的态度很明确,学生不可能花所有的时间去学习,否者就会完全失去对学习的兴趣,所以也应该给学生一些放松的时间。

一般在结尾段的最开始部分,考生就应该给考官一个明确的信号词,让考官了解文章已经进入尾声了。这里所谓的信号词就是一些结尾段的套句:

信号词:Finally, to sum up, inconclusion, in brief, therefore, thus, overall

句型:

1. it can be concludedthat…

2. we can findthat…

3. I think itis also important to remember that

4. the mainpoint is to make sure that

5. I believethat/ Personally, I think that/ I would say that/ I agree that/ My view is that

招式四:可采用以下技巧

1.总结式(重述前文)

把前文中的观点再在结尾段进行重述,但是不能重复与开头段或者题目中的单词。

E.g. In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the cause of this?What solutions can you suggest?

Perhaps parenting classes are needed to help them to do this, and high quality nursery schools could be established that would support families more in terms of rising the next generation. The government should fund this kind of parental support, because this is no longer a problem for individual families, but for society as a whole.

把solutions进行简单的再次描写–父母、好的托儿所、政府的资金扶助。

2.两分式

把文章涉及到的主题人或者物分成两种,对其进行分别的说明。

E.g. In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this ad completely wrong,while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinions on this?

Nevertheless,in better economic circumstances, few parents would choose to send their children out to full-time paid work. If learning responsibilities and work experience are considered to be important, then children can acquire these by having light, part-time jobs or even doing tasks such as helping their parents around the family home, which are unpaid, but undoubtedly of value in children's development.

对有钱的家庭而言,家长很少送小孩去做童工;如果是为了钱或者其他,可做兼职。

3.折中式

很难判断其中到底谁占据主导地位,或者什么是最重要的,两者是缺一不可的,需共同存在。

E.g. Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life.

Either nature or nurture is the major influence on a person, but that both have powerfuleffects. How these factors interact is still unknown today and they remain largely unpredictable in a person's life.

两者是缺一不可的,天赋和后天培养同等重要。

4.转折对比式

提出另一种群体,与之相比,会产生什么效果来支持自己的观点。

E.g. Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal of more money than people in other important professionals.Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.

Personally, I think that the amount of money such sports stars make is more justified than the huge earnings of movie stars, but at the same time, it indicates that our society places more value on sport than on more essential professions and achievements.

把运动员与其他方面的工作人员进行对比——比上不足比下有余。

总之,如果要写出一篇好的雅思作文一定要善始善终,这才是拿高分的黄金定律,希望考生们能够根据上文的一些建议找到适合自己的结尾方式,得到理想的成绩。

雅思小作文写作实用黄金50句(一)

1.the table shows the changes in the number of…over the period from…to… 该表格描述了在…年之…年间…数量的变化。

2.the bar chart illustrates that… 该柱状图展示了…

3.the graph provides some interesting data regarding… 该图为我们提供了有关…有趣数据。

4.the diagram shows (that)… 该图向我们展示了…

5.the pie graph depicts (that)…. 该圆形图揭示了…

6.this is a cure graph which describes the trend of… 这个曲线图描述了…的趋势。

7.the figures/statistics show (that)… 数据(字)表明…

8.the tree diagram reveals how… 该树型图向我们揭示了怎样…

9.the data/statistics show (that)… 该数据(字)可以这样理解…

10.the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that… 这些数据资料令我们得出结论…

11.as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table… 如图所示…

12.according to the chart/figures… 根据这些表(数字)…

13.as is shown in the table… 如表格所示…

14.as can be seen from the diagram,great changes have taken place in… 从图中可以看出,…发生了巨大变化。

15.from the table/chart/diagram/figure,we can see clearly that…or it is clear/apparent from the chart that… 从图表我们可以很清楚(明显)看到…

16.this is a graph which illustrates… 这个图表向我们展示了…

17.this table shows the changing proportion of a & b from…to… 该表格描述了…年到…年间a与b的比例关系。

18.the graph,presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in… 该图以圆形图形式描述了…总的趋势。 19.this is a column chart showing… 这是个柱型图,描述了…

20.as can be seen from the graph,the two curves show the flutuation of… 如图所示,两条曲线描述了…的波动情况。

21.over the period from…to…the…remained level. 在…至…期间,…基本不变。

22.in the year between…and… 在…年到…期间…

23.in the 3 years spanning from 1995 through 1998… 1995年至1998三年里…

24.from then on/from this time onwards… 从那时起…

25.the number of…remained steady/stable from (month/year) to (month/year). …月(年)至…月(年)…的数量基本不变。

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