2022年7月11日雅思大作文题目

Good education is more important for academic success than individual ability. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

高分范文及解析

Introduction

To win honourabledistinctionsin academic fields, some argue that high-quality education plays a more essential role than individual talents do. However, I tend to thinkotherwiseand reckon that both of them are equally important.

解析

教育+抽象的话题。可以先对抽象名词下定义,再对比讨论good education 和 individual ability. 本文立场:不同意,因为两者同等重要,且互相弥补。

Ø distinction n. 殊勋;荣誉称号

Ø otherwise adv. 以其他方式

Body 1

For one thing, good education does have its edges. To start with, it enables students to lay a firm theoretical foundation for academic development. When receiving formal schooling, students can not onlypolishtheir knowledge and sharpen their wits but also cultivate the vital ability to carry outempirical research, both of which are the bases of obtainingresearch findings. Besides, good education also helps to build up sound personal qualitiesconduciveto academic achievements. No onecomes into fame overnight. Without characters ofresilienceanddiligence, students who fail to withstand the frustration brought by repeated failure are less likely to win the honourable titleswith flying colours.// However, as those theories are so abstract and obscure, students with ordinary learnability may thuslag behind.

解析

教育的重要性:(1)学术层面:打磨知识,培养学术能力;(2)性格层面:韧性、毅力等塑造

Ø polish vt. 打磨;润色

Ø empirical adj. 以科学实验[经验]为依据的

Ø research findings n. 科研成果

Ø conducive to adj. 对…有用的

Ø come into fame overnight 一夜成名

Ø resilience n.[U] 韧劲

Ø diligence n.[U] 勤勉

Ø with flying colours 成功地

Ø lag behind vi. 落后

Body 2

For another, individual ability also matters a great deal. To illustrate, as such honorary titles arefew and far betweenand thus hard tocome by, the competition for the few positions available each year is extremelyintensegiventhe sea of applicants applying. Therefore, those who have afacilityfor academics tend to havea flying startin the rat race, as it is easier for them to understand thoseobscuretheories andsophisticatedexperiment steps. // However, it is a commonplace that some with afacultyfor academics finally fail to stand out in academia owing to either the lack of formal schooling or the absence of character nurturing.

解析

个人能力的重要性:天赋是基础

Ø few and far between adj. 少之又少

Ø come by v. 获得

Ø intense adj. 激烈的

Ø given prep. 考虑到

Ø facility n.[C] 天赋

Ø a flying start n. 好的开始

Ø obscure adj. 晦涩难懂的

Ø sophisticated adj. 精密的

Ø faculty n.[C] 天赋

Conclusion

In a nutshell, well-educated people withscholastic aptitudehave the most potential to achieve academic success.

解析

重申观点

Ø scholastic adj. 学术的

Ø aptitude n.[C] 天赋

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