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株洲雅思学习|雅思大作文满分范文深度剖析-社会现象类

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时间:2019-10-06

雅思考试考查的是考生的听、说、读、写四项基本的英语技能,目的在于检验考生在真实的语言环境中应用英语语言沟通的能力。

雅思考试的两种类型:学术类和普通培训类。A类试题用于申请学习正规学位课程者参加的考试;G类试题用于申请学习非正规课程者以及申请移民者参加的考试。

雅思考试的写作分为两部分,TASK 1和TASK 2。A类的TASK 1以图表作文为主,常考的题型包括曲线图、柱状图、饼状图、表格、流程图等;G类TASK 1以书信为主,常考的题型包括投诉信、感谢信、邀请信、道歉信、求职信、建议信等。A类和G类对TASK 2的要求是基本相同的。

Some people think that women should play an equal role as men in military force or police force; others say women are not suited for such kind of work. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

有些人认为在军队或警察部门中女性与男性应该发挥平等的作用,而另一些人则认为女性不适合此类工作。请讨论双方观点并表达你自己的看法。

题目剖析:此题目包含两组观点:正方,Some people think that women should play an equal role as men in military force or police force; 反方,others say women are not suited for such kind of work. 此题目属于就一组截然相反的观点展开讨论。

A woman&x27;s place in society marks the level of civilisation." In other words, the male-first concept can never orient the society into harmony and prosperity. Only when a balanced proportion of chances are allowed to both genders can the human civilisation make rapid strides ahead.

写作思路:引经据典-正面论证讨论作者的观点

重点词汇:creed n.信条,信念

accentuate v..强调,重读

rampancy n.猖獗,蔓生,繁茂

civilisation n.文明

orient ... into ...使......适应......,使......朝向......

harmony and prosperity n.和谐与繁荣

重点句型:

By no means shall we tolerate the rampancy of gender discrimination.

我们无论如何都不能容忍性别歧视的蔓延。

Only when a balanced proportion of chances are allowed to both genders can the human civilisation make rapid strides ahead.只有当允许将均等的机会给予两性时人类文明才能迅速进步。

Fortunately, women today perform increasingly significant duties in military troops and police forces. They no longer have to join the army under the guise of men like Hua Mulan and Mu Guiying, two prominent heroines in ancient China. Even though some may contend that men are physically stronger that women, this constitutes only a minor portion of the overall qualities required in each specific role. Women possess other strong points that equate to, or even surpass, men's, such as their oftentimes more compassionate minds. This perhaps explains why "the sixth sense" occurs in more women that men. Due to this, the distribution of labor in military and police forces should be based on the corresponding requirement of a specific post, not on the distinction of genders.

写作思路:事例论证-深入细节讨论女性的优势-分工以岗位要求为基准,与性别差异无关

重点词汇:significant adj.重大的,有意义的,意味深长的

increasingly significant 越来越重要的

under the guise of 在......伪装下

oftentimes adv.时常地,经常地

compassionate adj.富于同情心的,慈悲的

corresponding adj.相应的,相当的,一致的

be based on 基于......, 以......为基础

重点句型:

Due to this, the distribution of labor in military and police forces should be based on the corresponding requirement of a specific post, not on the distinction of genders.因此,在分配责任时,军队与警察部门应该以特定岗位的相应要求为基准,而不应以性别差异为基准。

To illustrate, in military forces women are entitled to become commanders. What should the criteria of such a high-ranking post be? Of course, an excellent army leader does not have to boast the strongest muscles. It is more important for him or her to have the ability to draw up successful strategies and issue effective orders by employing tactical knowledge and sharp wits. Both women and men are equally likely to meet these standards. Likewise, in the police force, women should also be granted the opportunities to serve as police chiefs, criminal investigation team captains armed with guns, etc. With the emergence of more and more female police officers, we must acknowledge that they deserve any status or rank their male colleagues could obtain.

写作思路:举例论证-选拔女性应以智慧和能力为标准

重点词汇:to illustrate adv.短语做状语 例如

entitle v.授权,给......资格/称呼

commander n.指挥官

criterion n.标准,准则;criteria(复)n. 标准

boast v. 自夸,以有......而自豪

draw up 起草

issue n.问题,观点;v.发表,发布

tactical knowledge and sharp wits战术知识与智慧

重点句型:

With the emergence of more and more female police officers, we must acknowledge that they deserve any status or rank their male colleagues could obtain.

In short, the extensive realisation of gender equality benefits society as a whole. Although there is still a long way to go before reaching that aim, modern citizens in all professional domains, both male and female, should join in the campaign against gender discrimination.

写作思路:总结-再次重申作者观点

重点词汇:extensive adj.广泛的,大量的,广阔的

equality n.平等

as a whole 从整体上

domain n.领域,产业

campaign n.战役,运动,竞选,军事行动

gender discrimination 性别歧视

重点句型:

Although there is still a long way to go before reaching that aim, modern citizens in all professional domains, both male and female, should join in the campaign against gender discrimination.

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